well, it could be better.
I wouldn't blam this, but I will give this some constructive criticisim. like, the violin playing part....if you ever seen a violinist, they don't play at the fingerboard (the black thing), they play close to the bridge (the wooden part). and also, whenever you put part of the lyrics up there, they we're out of sync, and I'm pretty sure that you know this.(cuz you made it!) and also, even though people have different talents, you're one of the many people who can do flash. I know it comes to experence to make a great flash movie. So, keep up the good work and I hoipe that you can make better, more worthy videos! Have a verry nice day! :D and don't listen to the people who thinks this sucks badly. they have to understand that people have different ways of doing flash. Maybe this was a way, but like I said, keep up the good work. God bless you!